Hello class! Great job on your replies to the blog. There were quite a few that were just stunning! Way to go A. Nguyen on your reply. C. Pool also did a great job in her peer response. Keep it up guys!
There were a few that were too short and did not take into account all the required factors of a response. Be sure to review the expectation of each response. Also, this is formal response, not a text message! No more bad grammar, abbreviations or incorrect spelling. Please edit your responses before you post them. Look for misspellings, run-on sentences, and abbreviations. For example, vocab is an abbreviation for vocabulary! :)
Keep up the good work! I am impressed with what I have seen thus far!
1. A difference between Fezziwig and Scrooge is how Fezziwig is much kinder and willing to enjoy the Christmas festivities. "You wouldn't believe how those two fellows went at it! They charged into the streets with the shutters--one, two, three--had 'em up in their places" Fezziwig also was very generous on the workload he gave them, which was to say, none! "No more work tonight!"
2. Scrooge and the woman may have had a strict business contract plainly to increase profit."we could improve our worldly fortune by our patient industry." The relationship started to evolve into a personal one, but as time passed on, Scrooge started to keep to himself more. The lady had to leave him to find a more suitable partner, both financially and intimately."You fear the world too much."
1) Fezziwig wasn't cold hearted and mean like Scrooge.Fezziwig wasn't rich like Scrooge"(pg.30)he laughed all over himself" 2)The woman on page 34 is his ex-fiancé and she left him because he rather be with his gold than take care of her
Fezziwig likes Christmas and throws party for Christmas "No more work tonight.Christmas eve,Dick.Christmas,Ebenezer!Let's have the shutters up,"cried old Fezziwig. Pg.30 2 Fezziwig has about 3 wife's and Scrooge doesn't have any " In came the three Miss Fezziwigs,beaming and lovable" .Pg.31 A. Huerta
-1)Fezziwig was not cruel and cold- hearted like Scrooge. 2) Scrooge cared more about money and Fezziwig cared more about his life. "he laughed all over himself.", No more work tonight.Christmas Eve, Dick. Christmas, Ebenezer! Let's have the shutters up". - The relationship between the girl and Scrooge on page 34 is they are girlfriend and boyfriend and she is leaving him because Scrooge loves his gold more than he loves her. T.Sandburg
1 ; Fezziwig is different because he is nicer & he enjoys Christmas unlike Scrooge which he doesn't like Christmas. For example " You wouldn't believe how those two fellows went at it!" The other reason is that he was easier on the other workers , he gave them less work. Example "Yo , Ho my boys! No more work tonight! Christmas Eve, Dick." page 32 .
2 ; They both worked alot for increasing the profits . Worth it for more . And they both pretty much look like they don't want to do anything to help . "You fear the world too much . All your other hopes have merged into the hope of being beyond the chance of its sordid reproach." page 34 . --G.Valencia ; (:
Question 1: One thing different about them is Fezziwig likes Christmas and Scrooge doesn't. Also Fezziwig was a kind man and Scrooge was not. " No more work tonight. Christmas Eve , dick. Christmas , Ebenezer! Let's have the shutters up," " before a man can say, Jack Robinson!". Question 2: The girl was Scrooges sister. " I am. That which promised happiness when we were one in heart, is fraught with misery now that we are two. How often and how keenly I have thought of this, I will not say. It is enough that I have thought of it, and can release you." page 35 S. Siefkas
One reason Scrooge and Frezziwig is that Frezziwig is all about adventure and outgoing while Scrooge is negative and quiet. It show in the text evidence "Hilli-ho!"cried old Fezziwig, from the high desk, with wonderful agility. He is all loud and positive. In the text evidence for Scrooge, where it says "Humbug!" said Scrooge;and walked across the room." Another reason is that Frezziwig is in love with Christmas while Scrooge hates Christmas with all of his heart. On page four it shows with text evidence that Scrooge says "Merry Christmas! What right have you to be merry? What reason do you have to be merry? Your poor enough."
2. The relationship between the girl and Scrooge is that they are business partners. The text evidence is not exact but I did do some inferencing when it said "Our contract is an old one." I think that because if it is their contract, most contracts are for business purpose. J.Luangrath
My second question is that they made a contract to each other when they were poor that's why they were together"It was made when we were poor and content to be so."Pg.34
1. Fezziwig likes Christmas "Hilli-ho!" cried old Fezziwig, skipping down from the high desk, with wonderful agility." (page 31) and Scrooge dosn't like Christmas "Out upon merry Christmas!" (page 4). Scrooge didn't like to spend money "What should I put you down for? Nothing! Scrooge replied" (page 7) and Fezziwig was ok with spending money " He has spent but a few pounds of your mortal money: three or four, perhaps. Is that so much that he deserves prasie?" 2. Scrooge and the girl were dating but are separating. "That which promised happiness when we were one in heart, is fraught with misery now that we are two."(page 35) A.Tankersley
-Fezziwig is outgoing and Crazy! He loves to do fun things! On the other hand Scrooge is the type of guy that hates things, and doesn't do anything fun...well he's a pretty boing guy."Hilli-ho!" cried old Fezziwig, skipping down from the high desk,with wonderful agility." And another thing, is that Fiziwig LIKES Christmas, and everyone knows Scrooge HATES Christmas."Merry Christmas! What right do you have to be merry?what reason have you to be merry?You're poor enough,"said Scrooge. -The relationship between the girl and Scrooge is that they were to teenage kids that were in love, yeah boyfriend and girlfriend...Little love birds! " What then?"he retorted."Even if I have grown so much wiser,what then? I am not changed towards you." <3 'V.Rosaless(;
1. The difference between Fezziwig and Scrooge.Is that Fezziwig is more kinder than Scrooge and Fezziwig loves christmas and Scrooge doesn't at all. "Scrooge had acted like a man out of his wits". " to make these silly folks so full of gratitude". Pg.32,33
2.They where so close together because they had an old contract they had to do. Thad is the relationship between them. "our contract is an old one"."it was made when we were both poor and content to be so,until,in good season,we could improve our worldly fortune by our patient industry". C.NAVA
Actually Fezziwig was the exactly opposite of Scrooge.For example Fezziwig loved to dance while Scrooge hated to dance pg32 "then Fezziwig stood up to dance with mrs fezziwig".Also Fezziwig liked christmas while Scrooge hated Christmas.pg30"yo ho,my boys!"said fezziwig."no more work tonight". Questions List 2 differences between Scrooge and Fezziwig....
Question2 what's the relationship between The girl and Scrooge. The girl is scrooges sister and she died so that's their relationship plus Scrooge misses her.pg 34. R.Rivera
1. Fezziwig is cheerful and happy while Scrooge is depressing and negative. Page 30 "laughed all over himself, from his shoes to his organ of benevolence" Page 12"It's humbug still. I won't believe it." Fezziwig is also different then Scrooge because he likes Christmas and Scrooge despises Christmas and people who enjoy it. Page 30 "No more work tonight. Christmas Eve, Dick. Christmas Ebenezer!" Page 7 "I don't make merry myself and I can't afford to make idle people marry."
2. The relationship between Scrooge and the girl is they work together. Page 34 "Our contract is an old one. It was made when we were both poor and content to be so, until, in good season, we could improve our sorely fortune by our patient industry."
1.Fezziwig was social,outgoing,and crazy.Scrooge on the other hand wanted to be alone and doesn't want anything to do with the world."No more work tonight.Christmas Eve,Dick. Christmas Ebenezer! Said Fezziwig "every idiot who goes about with 'Merry Christmas,' on his lips, should be boiled with his own pudding, and buried with a stake of holly through his heart.He should!" Said Scrooge. -Scrooge didn't have a wife Fezziwig did to Scrooge money was more important to him.For Fezziwig family was. 2.The girl on pg.34 was his girlfriend she broke up with him because he loves his gold more than her and rather be with the gold."It matters little," she said,softly."To you,very little.Another idol has displaced me;and f it can cheer and comfort you in time to come, as I would have tried to do, I have no just cause to grieve." " What Idol has displaced you." said Scrooge "A golden one." -N. Nounennady:)
To N. Nounennady I agree with the answer's for the first question good way of telling how they're different. Good work with the second question that could be a possibility.
To D.Oudomphong I agree to you first question and the text evidence really proves your point. I agree to your second answer as well. Great theory on Scrooge and the girl.
Hello class!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your replies to the blog. There were quite a few that were just stunning! Way to go A. Nguyen on your reply. C. Pool also did a great job in her peer response. Keep it up guys!
There were a few that were too short and did not take into account all the required factors of a response. Be sure to review the expectation of each response. Also, this is formal response, not a text message! No more bad grammar, abbreviations or incorrect spelling. Please edit your responses before you post them. Look for misspellings, run-on sentences, and abbreviations. For example, vocab is an abbreviation for vocabulary! :)
Keep up the good work! I am impressed with what I have seen thus far!
Mrs. Nyvall
1. A difference between Fezziwig and Scrooge is how Fezziwig is much kinder and willing to enjoy the Christmas festivities. "You wouldn't believe how those two fellows went at it! They charged into the streets with the shutters--one, two, three--had 'em up in their places" Fezziwig also was very generous on the workload he gave them, which was to say, none! "No more work tonight!"
ReplyDelete2. Scrooge and the woman may have had a strict business contract plainly to increase profit."we could improve our worldly fortune by our patient industry." The relationship started to evolve into a personal one, but as time passed on, Scrooge started to keep to himself more. The lady had to leave him to find a more suitable partner, both financially and intimately."You fear the world too much."
A. Nguyen
1) Fezziwig wasn't cold hearted and mean like Scrooge.Fezziwig wasn't rich like Scrooge"(pg.30)he laughed all over himself"
ReplyDelete2)The woman on page 34 is his ex-fiancé and she left him because he rather be with his gold than take care of her
Pocahantas:)
Fezziwig likes Christmas and throws party for Christmas "No more work tonight.Christmas eve,Dick.Christmas,Ebenezer!Let's have the shutters up,"cried old Fezziwig. Pg.30
ReplyDelete2 Fezziwig has about 3 wife's and Scrooge doesn't have any " In came the three Miss Fezziwigs,beaming and lovable" .Pg.31
A. Huerta
-1)Fezziwig was not cruel and cold- hearted like Scrooge.
ReplyDelete2) Scrooge cared more about money and Fezziwig cared more about his life.
"he laughed all over himself.", No more work tonight.Christmas Eve, Dick. Christmas, Ebenezer! Let's have the shutters up".
- The relationship between the girl and Scrooge on page 34 is they are girlfriend and boyfriend and she is leaving him because Scrooge loves his gold more than he loves her.
T.Sandburg
1 ; Fezziwig is different because he is nicer & he enjoys Christmas unlike Scrooge which he doesn't like Christmas. For example " You wouldn't believe how those two fellows went at it!" The other reason is that he was easier on the other workers , he gave them less work. Example "Yo , Ho my boys! No more work tonight! Christmas Eve, Dick." page 32 .
ReplyDelete2 ; They both worked alot for increasing the profits . Worth it for more . And they both pretty much look like they don't want to do anything to help . "You fear the world too much . All your other hopes have merged into the hope of being beyond the chance of its sordid reproach." page 34 .
--G.Valencia ; (:
Question 1: One thing different about them is Fezziwig likes Christmas and Scrooge doesn't. Also Fezziwig was a kind man and Scrooge was not. " No more work tonight. Christmas Eve , dick. Christmas , Ebenezer! Let's have the shutters up," " before a man can say, Jack Robinson!". Question 2: The girl was Scrooges sister. " I am. That which promised happiness when we were one in heart, is fraught with misery now that we are two. How often and how keenly I have thought of this, I will not say. It is enough that I have thought of it, and can release you." page 35 S. Siefkas
ReplyDeleteOne reason Scrooge and Frezziwig is that Frezziwig is all about adventure and outgoing while Scrooge is negative and quiet. It show in the text evidence "Hilli-ho!"cried old Fezziwig, from the high desk, with wonderful agility. He is all loud and positive. In the text evidence for Scrooge, where it says "Humbug!" said Scrooge;and walked across the room."
ReplyDeleteAnother reason is that Frezziwig is in love with Christmas while Scrooge hates Christmas with all of his heart. On page four it shows with text evidence that Scrooge says "Merry Christmas! What right have you to be merry? What reason do you have to be merry? Your poor enough."
2. The relationship between the girl and Scrooge is that they are business partners. The text evidence is not exact but I did do some inferencing when it said "Our contract is an old one." I think that because if it is their contract, most contracts are for business purpose.
J.Luangrath
My second question is that they made a contract to each other when they were poor that's why they were together"It was made when we were poor and content to be so."Pg.34
ReplyDeleteA. Huerta
1. Fezziwig likes Christmas "Hilli-ho!" cried old Fezziwig, skipping down from the high desk, with wonderful agility." (page 31) and Scrooge dosn't like Christmas "Out upon merry Christmas!" (page 4). Scrooge didn't like to spend money "What should I put you down for? Nothing! Scrooge replied" (page 7) and Fezziwig was ok with spending money " He has spent but a few pounds of your mortal money: three or four, perhaps. Is that so much that he deserves prasie?"
ReplyDelete2. Scrooge and the girl were dating but are separating. "That which promised happiness when we were one in heart, is fraught with misery now that we are two."(page 35)
A.Tankersley
-Fezziwig is outgoing and Crazy! He loves to do fun things! On the other hand Scrooge is the type of guy that hates things, and doesn't do anything fun...well he's a pretty boing guy."Hilli-ho!" cried old Fezziwig, skipping down from the high desk,with wonderful agility." And another thing, is that Fiziwig LIKES Christmas, and everyone knows Scrooge HATES Christmas."Merry Christmas! What right do you have to be merry?what reason have you to be merry?You're poor enough,"said Scrooge.
ReplyDelete-The relationship between the girl and Scrooge is that they were to teenage kids that were in love, yeah boyfriend and girlfriend...Little love birds! " What then?"he retorted."Even if I have grown so much wiser,what then? I am not changed towards you." <3 'V.Rosaless(;
1. The difference between Fezziwig and Scrooge.Is that Fezziwig is more kinder than Scrooge and Fezziwig loves christmas and Scrooge doesn't at all. "Scrooge had acted like a man out of his wits". " to make these silly folks so full of gratitude". Pg.32,33
ReplyDelete2.They where so close together because they had an old contract they had to do. Thad is the relationship between them. "our contract is an old one"."it was made when we were both poor and content to be so,until,in good season,we could improve our worldly fortune by our patient industry".
C.NAVA
Actually Fezziwig was the exactly opposite of Scrooge.For example Fezziwig loved to dance while Scrooge hated to dance pg32 "then Fezziwig stood up to dance with mrs fezziwig".Also Fezziwig liked christmas while Scrooge hated Christmas.pg30"yo ho,my boys!"said fezziwig."no more work tonight".
ReplyDeleteQuestions List 2 differences between Scrooge and Fezziwig....
Question2 what's the relationship between The girl and Scrooge.
The girl is scrooges sister and she died so that's their relationship plus Scrooge misses her.pg 34. R.Rivera
1. Fezziwig is cheerful and happy while Scrooge is depressing and negative. Page 30 "laughed all over himself, from his shoes to his organ of benevolence" Page 12"It's humbug still. I won't believe it."
ReplyDeleteFezziwig is also different then Scrooge because he likes Christmas and Scrooge despises Christmas and people who enjoy it. Page 30 "No more work tonight. Christmas Eve, Dick. Christmas Ebenezer!" Page 7 "I don't make merry myself and I can't afford to make idle people marry."
2. The relationship between Scrooge and the girl is they work together. Page 34 "Our contract is an old one. It was made when we were both poor and content to be so, until, in good season, we could improve our sorely fortune by our patient industry."
D.Oudomphong
1.Fezziwig was social,outgoing,and crazy.Scrooge on the other hand wanted to be alone and doesn't want anything to do with the world."No more work tonight.Christmas Eve,Dick. Christmas Ebenezer! Said Fezziwig "every idiot who goes about with 'Merry Christmas,' on his lips, should be boiled with his own pudding, and buried with a stake of holly through his heart.He should!" Said Scrooge.
ReplyDelete-Scrooge didn't have a wife Fezziwig did to Scrooge money was more important to him.For Fezziwig family was.
2.The girl on pg.34 was his girlfriend she broke up with him because he loves his gold more than her and rather be with the gold."It matters little," she said,softly."To you,very little.Another idol has displaced me;and f it can cheer and comfort you in time to come, as I would have tried to do, I have no just cause to grieve." " What Idol has displaced you." said Scrooge "A golden one."
-N. Nounennady:)
To J. Luangrath. I agree that your second question is correct, but you could build up on it more.
ReplyDeleteA. Nguyen
To C nava I agree with 1 i think its very well thought out and put together right.2 is magnificent also
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To N. Nounennady I agree with the answer's for the first question good way of telling how they're different. Good work with the second question that could be a possibility.
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To D.Oudomphong
ReplyDeleteI agree to you first question and the text evidence really proves your point. I agree to your second answer as well. Great theory on Scrooge and the girl.
J.Luangrath